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[禁忌之恋] 【美妇警长悍匪儿番外篇之监狱风云】(1)

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此文是一篇不可多得的好文章，文章从开头交代人物出场，事件的渲染铺垫，寥寥数语，清晰明了。过程描写，笔者不吝笔墨，很好的捕捉着事件的自然发展。对妈妈的心理描写，角色的转换非常成功，妈妈从开始的抵触羞羞答答，到思想松动，最后彻底放弃反抗以及惧怕的心理描写栩栩如生。感谢楼主，红心献上！
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