davidbreeze 发表于 2022-10-12 04:03   全显示 1楼
这章写得很不错，从头到尾看了两遍。无论是情节架构还是人物心理还是细节描写都非常到位。希望作者加油，写出更好的作品。其实黄文有的时候为了肉戏，会在逻辑上有些混乱，好的作品应该是二者兼顾。好的作品会让人忍不住一看再看


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